题目内容
【题目】书面表达 （共1题， 满分15分）
假如你是Li Ming，你和朋友一起讨论各自去过的地方以及做过的一些活动。请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你朋友的相关情况， 请适当增加细节内容。
Name | Activity | Feeling |
Li Ming | travel to Beijing, live in another city, try seafood | The seafood was delicious. … |
Tony | eat a Western meal, enter a dancing competition, watch a football match | The football match was exciting. … |
Lily | travel alone, cook dinner for the family, visit the museum | Cooking is difficult. … |
要求：（1）要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚；
（2）可适当发挥， 70词左右（不包括已经给出的内容）。
My friends and I talk about the places we have visited and the things we have done. __________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
My friends and I talk about the places we have visited and things we have done. I traveled to Beijing last summer with my friends. I tried seafood. I think it was delicious. This is the first time I have lived in another city. My friend Tony ate a Western meal. He also entered a dancing competition. Last week he watched a football match with his friends. He felt the match was exciting. Lily traveled alone. Though cooking is difficult, she cooks dinner for the family. She visited the museum last Sunday. She felt it was very interesting.
【解析】
试题分析：这篇短文让我们以李明的身份和朋友们一起讨论自己参观过的地方和做过的事情。题目中给出了我们三个人的信息，你自己、Tony和Lily，表格中有他们曾做过的事情以及他们的感受，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般过去时态，因此我们要特别注意每句话中谓语动词的形式，都要去过去式，特别是要注意不规则动词过去式的变化。根据表达的需要，我们可以增加一些内容，但这些内容要符合文章整体表达的需要。写作中除注意语言的准确之外，还要注意使用一些连词或句型，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
写作亮点：这是一篇不错的作文，短文中作者介绍了自己曾去过的地方和做过的事情，还介绍了自己的两个朋友Tony和Lily他们的情况。短文主要分成三个部分，自己、Tony和Lily，先介绍了曾去过的地方和做过的事情，然后还提到了他们的感受。短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，尤其是注意了动词形式的变化，符合英语的表达规范。另外作者还使用了一些较好的句型，这些好的句型有：This is the first time I have lived in another city.、Last week he watched a football match with his friends、Though cooking is difficult, she cooks dinner for the family等。
