题目内容
【题目】书面表达
在生活中,你一定有过很多次旅游经历。你的经历是有趣的,还是难忘的?今年暑假你和你的家人一起去了青岛度假,现在请你根据下面的表格信息提示,并进行适当发挥,以My trip to Qingdao写一篇80字左右的短文。
Time | this summer vacation |
Place | Qingdao |
Transportation(交通) | …… |
Members (成员) | …… |
Activities | beach ,sea food, Qingdao Polar Ocean World,gifts…… |
Feeling | a beautiful place, air, delicious food, people, have chance(机会)to…… |
My trip to Qingdao
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【答案】
My trip to Qingdao
I have a forgettable trip. This summer vacation I went on a trip to Qingdao with my parents. We went there by train. We visited beach and Qingdao Polar Ocean World. We had sea food. I bought some gifts for my best friends. Qingdao is a beautiful place. It has fresh air and delicious food. The people there are friendly. If I have chance to go to Qingdao, I will go there again.
【解析】
试题分析:这题材料作文,就是考生根据材料内容的提示提炼写作内容和要点,写作时要用简单句,包括主系表结构,主谓宾结构,时态主要是一般过去时态,注意主谓一致,单词拼写正确。注意应用所给短语和单词。
写作亮点:这是一篇比较优秀的作文,本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;语言表达要符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。字数符合要求。