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【题目】写作

请你根据以下提示,以 My hometown为题写一篇短文。(不少于80字)

1.我的家乡是一座历史悠久的小镇,离上海大约一个半小时车程。

2.多条河流穿镇而过,因鱼米而出名。

3.过去人们过着贫困的生活,但近几年发生了很大变化。大多数人已搬进了新公寓。

4.政府正采取措施改善我们的生活。环境比以前好了很多。

5.我相信…

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【答案】

My hometown is a small town with a long history. It takes about one and a half hours to take a bus here from shanghai. Several rivers go through the town. It is famous for fish and rice. People had a poor life in the past. But it has changed a lot in the past few years. Most people have moved into the new flats. The government is doing something to improve our life. The environment is better than before. I believe my hometown will be better.

【解析】

试题分析:本文是一篇给材料的作文,让学生介绍自己家乡。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点:该文语句通顺,段落清晰,表达了题目所给出的各个要点。短文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩如:It is famous for fish and rice. I believe my hometown will be better..等等。

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【题目】My name is Claire. I live in a very small house in a town called Kingston.

I love to visit Highgrove Road. This road has a lot of big houses on it, some even look like palaces. Highgrove Road is next to the beach. I like to sit on the beach and imagine (想象) what these houses look like inside.

My favourite house is a pink house at the end of the road. In my dreams this house has four sitting rooms and two dining rooms, all on the ground floor. One dining room is for the family and the other one is for friends. It has a really big kitchen next to the dining room. The house has a bathroom with a toilet, a sink(水槽), a bath and a shower. The house is very tidy(整洁的) and very quiet. Sometimes you can hear the sound of the sea or the sound of the rain on the roof (房顶), if it rains. In front of the house, there is a big garden with a swimming pool. It is the biggest swimming pool in the whole town. A friendly family live in this house and they often invite friends over to use their swimming pool.

My dream is to live in a house just like this. My mother thinks I should stop dreaming and start studying for my exams!

【1】Highgrove road is next to _________.

A. the beach B. Claire’s school

C. a palace D. a big house

【2】What is the colour of Claires favourite house?

A. Red. B. Purple. C. Pink. D.span> Blue.

【3】How many rooms are there in this house in Claires dream?

A. Eight. B. Ten. C. Five. D. Three.

【4】Claires dream is __________.

A. to pass her exams

C. to use the swimming pool

B. to buy this house

D. to live in a similar (类似的) house

【5】What do you know about Claires real house?

A. It is new. B. It is very big.

C. It is very small. D. It is clean.

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