题目内容
【题目】写作
请你根据以下提示,以 My hometown为题写一篇短文。(不少于80字)
1.我的家乡是一座历史悠久的小镇,离上海大约一个半小时车程。
2.多条河流穿镇而过,因鱼米而出名。
3.过去人们过着贫困的生活,但近几年发生了很大变化。大多数人已搬进了新公寓。
4.政府正采取措施改善我们的生活。环境比以前好了很多。
5.我相信…
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【答案】
My hometown is a small town with a long history. It takes about one and a half hours to take a bus here from shanghai. Several rivers go through the town. It is famous for fish and rice. People had a poor life in the past. But it has changed a lot in the past few years. Most people have moved into the new flats. The government is doing something to improve our life. The environment is better than before. I believe my hometown will be better.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇给材料的作文,让学生介绍自己家乡。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:该文语句通顺,段落清晰,表达了题目所给出的各个要点。短文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩如:It is famous for fish and rice. I believe my hometown will be better..等等。