题目内容
何敏是一个来自贫苦地区的孩子,虽然品学兼优,但却因为家庭贫寒而辍学。假设你是你班的班长,组织了一次班级活动,为何敏义演(give a show),义捐(give out),帮助她完成学业。请根据所给提示写一篇60词左右的短文介绍这次活动。
提示:
1. 活动时间:8月25日上午
2. 活动地点:学校操场
3.义捐物品:钱、书和衣物。
One possible version:
On August 25th morning, our class gave a show on the playground in our school. We wanted to help He Min. She had to drop out of school because her family was poor. Some students sang and danced, and some students showed a play called Project Hope. Then we raise money for her. After that we gave out our books, clothes and other things to help her finish her study.
On August 25th morning, our class gave a show on the playground in our school. We wanted to help He Min. She had to drop out of school because her family was poor. Some students sang and danced, and some students showed a play called Project Hope. Then we raise money for her. After that we gave out our books, clothes and other things to help her finish her study.
试题分析:本题是写一篇介绍班级活动有关情况的书面表达。班级活动的目的是为了帮助贫困学生何敏完成学业。根据题目要求,我们从活动的时间,活动的地点,活动的目的和原因,活动的具体内容等方面加以介绍。本文介绍的是过去的事件,所以我们在写作时,应使用的主要时态是过去时,同时注意语句的通顺和连贯,使用正确的词汇和短语。
点评:介绍过去的事件应该注意句中的主要时态是过去时,介绍某个事件通常从时间,地点,人物,事件和结果等方面加以介绍,同时在写作时应注意语言的通顺性和连贯性,尽量使用自己会的语言,从而提高写作质量。
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