Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你的班上来了一位新同学，她的名字叫Kitty，她是“野生动物保护俱乐部（Wild Protection Club）”的一名志愿者，请你根据表格内容写一篇文章。

要求：1．包括所有要点，并做适当发挥。

2．条理清晰、字迹工整。词数90词左右。

Name	Kitty	Age	15	School	Sunshine Secondary School	Grade	8
Personality	kind, helpful, hard-working
Hobbies	do sports, travel, read books about all kinds of animals
Working experiences	take good care of homeless animals, raise money for Save China’s Pandas
Feeling(s)	…
Dream(s)	…

Answer 1

【答案】

Kitty

I have a new classmate. Her name is Kitty. She is 15 years old. She is a volunteer for Wild Protection Club. We are in Class1, Grade8 in Sunshine Secondary School. She is kind, helpful and hard-working. She often helps me with English. She likes doing sports, traveling and reading books about all kinds of animals. Once she took good care of homeless animals and raised money for Save China’s Pandas. She loves animals. Her dream is to be a vet in a animal hospital.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己班上来了一位新同学，她的名字叫Kitty，她是“野生动物保护俱乐部（Wild Protection Club）”的一名志愿者，请你根据表格内容写一篇文章。结合所给材料，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，表述时应注意全面，尽量将每个要点包括。注意主谓一致问题。句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文是一篇优秀的范文，紧扣题材，用了所给材料的要点，包括所有要点，使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如： She often helps me with English.；She likes…；all kinds of； helps …with等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，条理清晰、字迹工整，字数符合要求。