Question

本月我市开展以“做文明市民，遵守交通规则”为主题的交通安全宣传月活动。请你写一篇短文，谈谈如何遵守交通法规。
提示：
1. 步行时，要往路边走, 横过公路之前，要看看左边和右边；
2. 乘车时，要排队候车，车未停稳，不能上落；
3. 开车时，在交通灯处应减慢速度，不要闯红灯(drive through the red traffic lights)；
4.……
要求:
1.用上所有提示，可适当发挥；  2. 语言正确，行文流畅，书写规范；
3.词数：80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。
In order to keep the road orderly and people safe, everyone should follow traffic rules.
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                              

Answer 1

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe, everyone should follow traffic rules. When you walk, you should walk at the side of the road. Always be careful and look left and right before you cross the road. When many passengers are waiting for the bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t push others. Don’t get on or get off the bus until it has stopped. If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights. Don’t drive through the red traffic lights. You must never drink. Don’t drive too fast.

解析试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第二人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时，注意情态动词should后面动词用原形。为了是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。