题目内容

书面表达(15分)

乔布斯是一位影响了世界的人。请根据下列内容, 结合自己的想法,写一篇60字以上的文章介绍他。

名字:

Steve Jobs

国籍:

美国

出生地:

Los Angeles

在世时间:

1955-2011

职业:

发明家,苹果公司总裁(CEO of Apple Inc.)

发明:

苹果电脑、iPod、iPhone、iPad等

影响:

Iphone成为世界上最流行的电话之一,它改变了人们的生活,使人们沟通起来更加容易,允许人们随时随地上网等。

要求:语意连贯,条理清晰,不少于60词。

Steve Jobs

Steve Jobs was one of the most famous persons of his time.

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Steve Jobs

Steve Jobs was one of the most famous persons of his time。Steve Jobs is an American and he was born in Los Angeles,in 1955.He died in 2011.Steve Jobs was the CEO of Apple Inc who invented apple computer,iPod,iPhone,iPad and so on.Iphone has become one of the world’s most popular phone,it changed the lives of people.It is more easily for people to communicate with each other,allowing people to surf the Internet whenever and wherever possible.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇图表作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如:Steve Jobs was the CEO of Apple Inc who invented apple computer; It is more easily for people to communicate with each other,allowing people to surf the Internet whenever and wherever possible.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点:图表类作文。

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