Question

你们班将以梦想为主题举办一次演讲会，请你以我的梦想为题写一篇演讲稿，演讲应包含以下几个方面的内容，并可以适当发挥，字数80-120词。
What’s your dream?
How will you achieve your dream?
When your dream comes true, what will you do?

Answer 1

My dream is to be a doctor when I grow up. I want to help those sick people.
I know , to achieve my dream, I need study hard now. I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school. I’ll study and do research on different diseases that bring great pains to the patients. After that , if I have a chance, I plan to open a hospital of my own. Then I can help as many as the poor people who have little money to see doctors. I wish everyone in the world can keep healthy and to alive longer.
I believe that I can realize my dream one day if only I insist on working hard and never give up.

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文介绍自己的梦想，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，从三个介绍了自己的梦想，梦想是当一名医生；怎样实现自己的梦想；实现梦想后怎样做。to achieve my dream, I need study hard now. I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school.句型的运用也让文章增色不少。