Question

12．有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘！所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物，拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食！针对这项行动，并根据以下提示，请你以"No Wasting On Food"为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与这项活动．
要点提示：
Reason：
（1）a waste of food，money
（2）Pollute the environment
…
Suggestion：
（1）eat up all your food/clear your plate
（2）leftovers（剩饭菜）…
（3）order less or smaller dishes
注意：（1）短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）语句流畅，书写规范；
（3）词数80-100词；
（4）文中不能出现真实人名、地名等信息；
（5）开头已给出，不计入总词数．
No Wasting On Food
Recently，many restaurants around our country have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．I believe it ismeaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．
It is a waste offood and money if we order too much food．Meanwhile，the environment will bepolluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．Weshould take action to support the campaign．
First，we shouldeat up all the food in our dishes and plates．Second，we may order less orsmaller dishes in the restaurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home andenjoy them later．
In a word，Ithink it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提纲类作文．我们利用生活中的细节来指导我们来写作．首先，对这次活动意义就行说明，进行总的概括，可以用I believe it is meaningful/necessary/important for us to take anactive part in this activity．来表达．然后对浪费造成的危害进行说明，根据题目的提示及自己的发挥，如吃太多对我们的健康也是有害的eating too much is bad for our health．来表达．最后，对反对浪费我们应该如何做提出建议，可以用first，second third来进行分层说明，同时用一句话进行全文的总结In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．

解答 参考范文：Recently，nearly26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．
I believe it ismeaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．
It is a waste offood and money if we order too much food．Meanwhile，the environment will bepolluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．Weshould take action to support the campaign．
First，we shouldeat up all the food in our dishes and plates．Second，we may order less orsmaller dishes in the restaurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home andenjoy them later．
In a word，Ithink it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．

点评 对于此类文章的写作，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型．如be good for，benefit，useful等单词短语．英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采．