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【题目】书面表达

端午节是我国最重要的传统节日之一。你是怎样度过今年端午节的?请根据提示要点写一篇英语小短文。(不少于40字)

提示要点:Did you have a good time?

What did you do ?

I will never forget this years Dragon Boat Festival

【答案】

One possible version:

I’ll never forget this year’s Dragon Boat Festival.I had a good time on vacation. I did a lot of interesting things. I helped my mother make zongzi. It was difficult but fun. Then, I had a big dinner with my family. It was a happy time to be with my family. My parents told me the story about the Dragon Boat Festival. I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. One of the most exciting things was watching the dragon boat races on Fenhe River. The vacation made me relaxed and excited.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍你如何过端午。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般过去时,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I did....;It was...;My parents told me...; I learned a lot ...;One of the most exciting things was...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我在端午节假期玩得高兴,接下来介绍我在端午节做的事:包粽子,吃丰盛的晚餐,父母给我讲故事,了解中国历史和文化,观看龙舟比赛,最后表达端午节使我放松,兴奋。此处have a good time, on vacation, a lot of, help sb do sth, tell sb sth, learn about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

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