Question

【题目】书面表达。

请根据表格中所给的提示，写一篇短文介绍你的网友Mike。

要求：1) 字数在80左右，不得出现真实校名和姓名。

2）文中须包括所有提示的内容，每个方面都可适当加以想象发挥。

基本信息	14岁，高个子，戴眼镜，在七年级（3）班 尖子生，最喜欢的学科是……
生活和饮食	每天6点半起床，步行上学…… 常吃 / 从不吃 / 很少吃…… 每周锻炼…… （给出合理建议）
爱好	擅长……；是……的一员
梦想	成为一名……

My online friend

I have an online friend. His name is Mike.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My online friend

I have an online friend. His name is Mike. He is 14 years old. He is tall with a pair of glasses.He is studying in Class3 Grade7. He is a top student. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is interesting. He gets up at 6:30, and he goes to school on foot. He often eats fruits and he never eats hamburgers. He seldom eats ice-cream. He does exercise twice a week. I think he should exercise every day. He is good at drawing, and he is in the school art club. He wants to be an artist. I hope his dream can come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的网友Mike。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：His name is…，He is....， because he thinks ...，I think…，I hope...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意在文后要祝他梦想成真

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的网友的名字，接下来介绍他的个人信息：年龄、长相、生活、饮食、擅长和梦想，最后希望他梦想成真。此处get up, go to school, on foot, twice a week, be good at, be in, want to do sth, come true等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。