Question

内容提示：赵刚今天有点感冒，头痛，嗓子痛且乏力。他看了医生，医生说他没什么大毛病，只要吃点药，多喝水，躺着休息一下，两天后就好了。

词数：60词左右。

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Zhao Gang had a little cold today. He had a headache and a sore throat. He felt tired. So he went to see a doctor. The doctor said he had nothing serious, but he had to take some medicine. He should drink more water, he should lie down and rest, then he would be OK two days later.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍赵刚感冒的症状及采取的措施。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He had…；The doctor said…；He should…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了赵刚感冒了，接下来介绍赵刚感冒的症状，最后介绍医生给他采取的建议，此处用了have a cold， have nothing serous, take some medicine, two days later等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。