题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请你根据以下提示,写一篇连贯的短文,(不少于80字)
1.我的家乡是一座历史悠久的小镇,离上海大约两个半小时车程。
2.我四岁时和父母一起搬到了这里。人们过着贫困的生活。
3.近几年家乡发生了很大变化。它看起来就像一个美丽的公园。
4.上周六,我们乘直达航班去香港。
5. 在第一天,我们观看了4—D电影。在第二天,我们去海鲜馆享受美食和……
6.我相信…… (对未来生活的期待)
要求:1.短文应包括要点中所给信息,省略号部分须适当发挥。
2.行文连贯,书写规范。
【答案】
My hometown is a small town with a long history. It is two and a half hours’ bus ride from here to Shanghai. My parents and I moved here when I was four years old. People lived a poor life. But it has changed a lot in the past few years. Now it looks like a beautiful park.
Last Saturday we took a direct flight to Hong Kong. On the first day, we watched a 4—D film. On the second day, We went to a seafood restaurant to enjoy delicious food and bought a lot of presents.I believe our life will be better than before.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文。题目所给材料内容比较详细,观点鲜明,条理清楚,我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题,深入挖掘题材内涵,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题,同时注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,这为文章增色不少。
【题目】从方框中选择合适的单词或词组完成句子。
lead a bit possible win noise |
【1】It’s for me to understand the passage,it is too difficult.
【2】Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck the heart of children all over the world.
【3】It’s too here.We can’t fall asleep.
【4】I often feel sad at first when I leave my mum and dad for a few days.
【5】The guide named Tony us to the river just now.