题目内容
【题目】书面表达
写一篇70个词左右的短文,描述一下你上周末的活动情况,内容必须包含以下要点,并适当发挥。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Saturday | morning | do homework |
afternoon | have a picnic | |
evening | … | |
Sunday | morning | help with the housework |
afternoon | go to the bookshop | |
evening | … |
My last weekend
I was very busy last weekend. ____________________________________________________
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【答案】
My last weekend
I was very busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework. On Saturday afternoon I had a picnic with my friends. On Saturday evening I visited my grandparents and watched TV with them. On Sunday morning, I helped with the housework, in the afternoon I went to the bookstore to buy some books. On Sunday evening, I washed many clothes, I went to bed early.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,描述上周末的活动情况.本题没有给出具体材料, 只给出了几个要点题,需要自己认真思考, 然后再动笔写作。选取材料时,注意选择自己熟悉的内容。在写作时要注意时态,人称和固定词组的搭配,要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态,人称是单数第一人称,注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:该文语句通顺流畅,表达了题目中要求的每一个要点,是一篇较好的习作。