题目内容
【题目】书面表达(15分)
以“My Ideal Home”为题写一篇短文,向你的朋友介绍你的理想家园。
提示:1.理想家园的总体概况。
2.理想家园共有几层及每层的设施。
My Ideal Home
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【答案】
One possible version:
My Ideal Home
Everyone has an ideal home. I also have one. My ideal home is very big. It has three floors with a beautiful garden behind it. On the ground floor, there is a sitting room and a KTV room, because I love singing very much. On the first floor, I have a nice bathroom and I can have a bath comfortably. And I study and sleep on the second floor. It’s quiet here.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文,介绍你的理想家园。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Everyone has...,It has...,there is...,And I study...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意连词的运用,文章连贯、通顺。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我有一个理想的家园,接下来介绍我的理想家园的位置、层次和设施,最后介绍自己在理想的家园所做的事。此处on the ground floor, sitting room, love doing sth, have a bath等这些词组的运用和介词短语with a beautiful garden behind it作后置定语也让文章增色不少。
【题目】书面表达。(共1题,计10分)
假如你是Peter, 根据表格信息介绍你自己的情况,开头已给出,不算入字数。要求:语句通顺,结构合理,可适当发挥。词数:60-80词左右。
Name: Peter | Age(年龄): 13 |
Nationality(国籍): Chinese | School: Qujiang No.1 High School |
Family: parents, sister and I | Likes(喜欢): play soccer |
Dislikes(不喜欢): watch TV | Tel: 87876556 |
My name is Peter.