题目内容
【题目】书面表达
这学期，我班转来了一位新同学，她叫Sunny。下面请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语文章，介绍一下Sunny的情况。
1. Sunny出生于北京，是一位12岁的女孩. 就读于阳光中学，学习刻苦，是班上的尖子生。
2. 她擅长唱歌，想当一位像王菲一样的歌手。
3. 有礼貌，乐于助人，深受同学喜欢。
4. 喜欢运动，很少吃零食，经常吃蔬菜和水果，是个很健康的女孩。
5.我们都想和她成为好朋友。
要求：语句通顺、要点齐全；词数：70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A new classmate
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【答案】
A new classmate
My new classmate Sunny is from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. She is 12 years old. She wears glasses. She often wears sports clothes and trainers. And she looks smart and modern. She likes studying. She is a top student at school. She loves singing, too. She wants to be a singer like Wang Fei. She loves sports and hardly has hamburgers for lunch. She often eats vegetables and fruit. She is a healthy girl. She is a polite and helpful girl. He often donates his pocket money to Project Hope. I think she is a good girl. We all want to make friends with her.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的新同学。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She is..；she never eats…；She shares…及she can…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己要和好友保持联系的愿望。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的新同学的名字，接下来介绍她的特点和喜好，最后说我们都想和她交朋友。此处用了often，too，hardly等这些副词的运用也让文章增色不少。
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