Question

【题目】书面表达。(10分)

同学们，你梦想中的学校是什么样子的呢？快告诉我们吧！请以My Dream School为题写一篇短文描述你梦想中的学校。。不少于60词。

My Dream School

My dream school will be

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream school will be big and beautiful with lots of trees and flowers．Everyone will have a computer in the classroom, so we can get information from the Internet．There will be some toys in the classroom, so we can play with them after class．The playground will be big．After school, we can play football or basketball on it．The teachers will be very kind and friendly．They will play with us．We will have less homework．We will use computers to do our homework and send them to teachers by email．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用给材料的话题作文。要求介绍理想的学校，主要用到将来时态。注意there be句型的将来时态的应用。

写作特点：这篇短文时态正确，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，同时使用了连词，so, 及短语After school,使文章更条理。