Question

根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信

      Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。）

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

 

Answer 1

【答案】

（范文摘自网络，范文分析出自本人）

More and more people like shopping（like doing sth） in supermarkets, which（定语从句） have developed rapidly in recent years. This, of course, has something to do with the convenience they offer to customers.

Firstly, prices in supermarkets are much lower, for they are run in the self-service style, therefore, fewer shop assistants are needed. Secondly, a wide variety of goods are displayed to satisfy the needs of different people. Thirdly, supermarkets usually have longer opening hours than other shops and stores.

Shopping in supermarkets can make customers feel confident, comfortable and relaxed. Moreover, it saves them both time and money.

That's why supermarkets are getting more and more crowded nowadays.

【解析】这类作文属于开放型作文，学生可以充分发挥自己的想象力，自由表达自己的想法，考生可以发挥自己的英语水平，区分度明显，成绩好的学生可以写出高级句型，显示自己的英语水平，如果成绩不好的学生，过多使用普通句式，文章就显得dry。

作文点评：文章的层次分明，逻辑感强，Firstly，Secondly, Thirdly，等使人觉得文章很通畅，这是现在非常欠缺的。此外，短语，例如has something to do with，offer to，both   and等都用得非常好，还有定语从句，名词性从句，是一遍值得学习的范文，考生应该在平时多积累这些文章。