Question

假设你是张丽，是家住四川芦山地震灾区林娜的笔友。她给你发来了一封电子邮件，请看后给她回复，针对她的问题给她一些建议，并谈谈你的想法。

Dear Zhang Li, I have been so sad these days. As you know, an earthquake happened in my hometown and both my parents died. Though the government gives us much help, my little sister and I cried every night because of missing, and I don’t want to learn anything. I find it hard to talk with the people around. Life is dark for me without parents’ love! What should I do?  I really need your help. Yours, Lin Na

 

Dear Lin Na, I’m so sorry to hear the sad news. I understand you . _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ I hope what I said can help you.  Yours, Zhang Li

 

Answer 1

A possible version:
I understand you . Everyone need parents’ love. But when they leave the world, we must learn to take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely.
So please stop crying and try your best to study harder to get a better future. Besides, you should take good care of your sister and help her live a happy life.  What’s more, it’s useful to talk about your problems with the people around you. And my parents and I can also help you.
I think it’s important for you to be strong and brave. I believe you will be better soon.

试题分析：本文的写作按照文章的要求从三方面进行阐述，首先表达对她的遭遇表示理解，说明我们鼻血学会照顾好我们自己勇敢地面对困难take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely. 然后提出一些建议，如不要哭泣努力学习来争取一个好的未来stop crying and try your best to study harder to get a better future.照顾你的妹妹take good care of your sister，都与周围的人进行交流it’s useful to talk about your problems with the people around you.最后表达自己的想法（如坚强和勇敢是非常重要的it’s important for you to be strong and brave.）和希望I believe you will be better soon.
点评：本文难度不大，一般都有话可说，写作过程中写作条理性要把握好，对于自己所提出的建议，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。