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13．某中学在开展"崇尚节俭，文明做人（advocating thrift and being civilized）"活动一年来，取得了很好的效果，但还有极少数学生做得不够好，在校园里依然还会出现以下图片中的情形．请你选择以下现象中的几种或全部进行描述，并就中学生如何"杜绝浪费，文明做人"提出至少两点建议．

leave the tap on    leave the lights on    throw the food away    draw on the wall   drop rubbish everywhere
要求：1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名．
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．
3．词数80～100．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Some middle school students aren't doing enough in"advocating thrift and being civilized"．We're sorry to see that there is still some waste in our school!For example，some often leave thetaps on after washing their hands．In the dinning hall，a lot offoodcan be seen left after the meals．What's worse，we often find that waste paper is thrown everywhere，which makes others feel uncomfortable．In addition，some students like to write or draw on the wall or on the desk．
As middle school students，we should develop good habits and stop wasting anything．Let's do it from now on．．

Answer 1

分析 这篇作文要求我们对学生的一些浪费行为进行描述，并提出合理建议．文中开头已给出，我们可以先结合图片，对浪费现象进行描述，然后提出建议，这需要我们展开想象，写作时，我们要注意观察图片，并且用上给出的这些短语．描述现象时，可用一般现在时，谈建议可用一般将来时或情态动词．

解答 Some middle school students aren't doing enough in"advocating thrift and being civilized．"
    We're sorry to see that there is still some waste in our school!For example，some often leave the taps on after washing their hands．In the dinning hall，a lot of food can be seen left after the meals．What's worse，we often find that waste paper is thrown everywhere，which makes others feel uncomfortable．In addition，some students like to write or draw on the wall or on the desk．
    As middle school students，we should develop good habits  and stop wasting anything．Let's do it from now on．

点评 本题是一篇看图作文题，要求学生把一幅或几幅内容连续的图画有条理、有层次地再现出来．就本道题目而言写作时要注意：一、正确理解提示和要求．二、确定体裁格式．本文应该属于议论文．三、确立人称．应该是第一人称．四、确定时态和语态．由于是描述一般现象，故用一般现在时态．五、展开想象．依据图画细节对画面的内容加以想象、扩充或补充．