题目内容
【题目】你以后会有很多钱的,想一想如果你有了钱,你会用着些钱干什么?请根据所给的提示词汇,展开联想,以“If I have money”为题写一篇短文。词数120左右。
提示词汇:1. travel around the world
2. a big house, parents, a happy life, buy a car
3. charity(慈善), help poor students, go to school, get an education…
If I have money
If I have a lot of money,
【答案】
If I have a lot of money
If I have a lot of money, I will travel around the world with my family because I like traveling very much.
If I have a lot of money, I will buy a big house and live in it with my parents because I don't want to live alone. I will buy a car, too. So I can go everywhere with my parents easily. We will have a happy life.
If I have a lot of money, I will give some to the charities to help poor students.Because most of them are poor, they can'tgo to school. With my help I think they will get a good education. And I will be happy to see that.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。本文要写的材料比较具体:有钱后,第一个方面涉及旅行,第二个是为家人做一些事情,第三是做慈善。我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语,可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知主要用if引导的时间状语从句。注意对将来时态的应用。
写作亮点:这篇短文内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。能熟练的运用条件状语从句和将来时态。使用了许多的连词及短语,使文章更条理。