Question

【题目】书面表达（10 分）根据所给图画和文字提示，用英语写一篇约 80 词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。

Answer 1

【答案】

One day, Mary was on her way to school. When she just got to the river bank, she saw an old man who was blind was by the river. He wanted to go across the river. But he didn’t find the bridge. He was in danger. Without thinking twice. Mary ran to the old man and asked him to stop. Then Mary led the old man to cross the river by going across the bridge. Finally, the old man was safe. He was very thankful and Mary was very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇看图作文，根据图片内容讲述图中发生的故事。事件是过去发生的，用一般过去时态；写作中既以图片内容为序，也要以时间先后、动作先后为序。用第三人称作主语，多用间接引语进行描述，不用直接引语作对话描写。

写作亮点：本文按照故事发生的先后为序，层次清楚；把事情发生的时间，地点，人物以及事件发生的经过都交待得清楚，记叙文的基本要素很齐。短文结尾，老人很感激，而玛丽很开心，“助人为乐”，自然点题。