Question

进来中国人都在说中国梦，假如你是一个无锡中学生，你叫Gao Fei, 来自湖北，目睹了无锡最近几年的发展和变化，有喜有忧。于是你给政府有关部门发了一份e-mail，说说自己对未来的一些梦想，内容要点如下：
1. 最近几年无锡发展很快；比如，道路变宽了；城里可供人们休闲的场所也多了；这里的人们过着幸福的生活；
2. 但是还存在一些严重的问题：房价太高，许多人根本买不起房子；因为工业的发展，水和空气被严重污染；人们很难呼吸到新鲜空气。
我的梦想：……
注意1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 第3要点作2-3句话的适当发挥；
3. E-mail的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 词数：80个词左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you? It’s my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you. Recently，people in China have been talking about Chinese Dream. I also have my own dream and Iwould like to share it with others.
My name is Gao Fei. I’m a middle school student. I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here.
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Yours sincerely,
Gao Fei

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you? It’s my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you. Recently，people in China have been talking about Chinese Dream. I also have my own dream and I like to share it with others.
My name is Gao Fei. I’m a middle school student. I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here.
Wuxi has developed quickly in the last few years. For example, the roads become wide. There are many places for people to relax. The people here are living a happy life.
     But there are still some problems. The prices of the houses are too high. Many people can’t afford to buy them at all. Water and air are badly polluted. It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.
     My dream is that people in Wuxi can enjoy clearer blue sky , more beautifule Taihu lake and that every family can own a nice comfortable home in the future .
Yours sincerely,
Gao Fei

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍梦想的短文。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。