Question

假设Daniel是你的好朋友，下面是他的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“Daniel's dream”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

具体要求：

1．不少于70词，开头己给出，不计入总词数。

2．语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。

3．内容必须包括上表中的要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。

4．参考词汇：decide v．决定

 

Answer 1

Daniel's dream

Daniel is my good friend. He is short and fat. He is not good at math and art. But recently his dream is to be a policeman. There are many books about policeman in his room and he often reads them. These days he is watching a police movie and he thinks policemen are very great. In order to make his dream come true,he decides to change his life style.Firstly, eat more vegetables and fruit and exercise to make him healthy and strong. Secondly ,work hard at all subjects at school. Thirdly, read more books at home.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要写Daniel的外貌、学习、梦想，全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如be good a, in order to, come true,,work hard at ,at school, at home 等短语；目的状语从句 In order to make his dream come true，宾语从句he thinks policemen are very great；there be句型There are many books about policeman in his room ；不定式做表语 to be a policeman;使用了层次副词Firstly,Secondly ,Thirdly,令文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。