题目内容
有这样一则故事：在唐太宗贞观年间，在一个磨坊里，有一匹马和一头驴成了好朋友，马在外面拉贷，驴在磨坊里拉磨。有一天，唐僧要到天竺取经，选中了这匹马，于是这匹马就随唐僧一起西游天竺，驮回了真经，回来后，这匹马向惜日的好友――驴，讲述了一路上的美丽风景和奇文趣事，这头驴好生羡慕。这匹马说：事实上，我和你都在一刻不停地走着一样远的路，所不同是，我和师傅确定了远大的目标，并坚定地走下去，而你只是在磨坊里被矇住了眼睛。
请根据上面的文字提示，结合学校开展的“My Dream”主题班会，写一篇书面发言材料，词数80以上。
Hello, boys and girls!
So glad to share my dream with you today. When I was a child, I wanted to be a teacher. My father was a teacher, and he taught me a lot. I respected him very much. On my tenth birthday, he asked me,“What do you want to be when you grow up?”I answered proudly,“I want to be a teacher like you!”On hearing this, my father was very happy and said to me, “Work hard and your dream will come true. ” Not long ago, one of my primary school teachers was ill. She wanted me to take her place for two weeks. I was glad but nervous. My father said to me,“This is a good chance. Catch it! I wish you success!” When I came into the classroom, the children were very happy. I introduced myself to them. Soon, I got on well with them. They all liked me and I loved them. With my father and headmaster's help, I did the work very well. Now, I often miss those lovely children. That experience had made me even more interested in being a teacher in the future.
That’s all! Thanks for listening!
解析试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，要求写一篇介绍自己理想的短文。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
考点：命题作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。
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