Question

假设你有一位朋友叫Li Ming，他给你看了他家人的一张照片，照片中有他的家人，还有家人的个人物品及物品所处位置，请根据以下提示，写一段70词左右的小短文。
1 父亲，电脑，桌子上； 黑色，。
2 母亲，手表，床上；蓝色。
3 兄弟，捧球，床底下；绿色。
4妹妹，铅笔盒，书包里；红色。
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Answer 1

Look at this photo. It is my friend’s family photo. My friend’s name is Li Ming. These are his parents. This is his father’s computer. It’s black and it is on the desk. This is his mother’s watch. It’s on the bed and it’s blue. The boy is his brother. The baseball is his. It’s green and it’s under the bed. The girl is his sister. Her pencil box is in her schoolbag. It is red. Li Ming and I like the photo very much.

试题分析：本文的写作不难，首先介绍这个我朋友的全家福照片It is my friend’s family photo.然后按照题目的提示分别介绍他们是谁，所有的东西，所在的位置，如This is his father’s computer. It’s black and it is on the desk.及The girl is his sister. Her pencil box is in her schoolbag.等逐条进行描写，描写位置关系时注意使用on,in,under,beside等词。最后一句话进行总结Li Ming and I like the photo very much.
点评：本文的写作要抓住要点，对该照片的相关内容都要描写到。初一的作文着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。