Question

【题目】书面表达

动物是人类的好朋友，没有动物就没有人类，但有些人乱砍滥伐树木，有的甚至为了赚更多的钱而猎杀动物，不知不觉中动物生存环境越来越差,动物也越来越少,有的甚至濒临灭绝。请你根据提示写一篇关于如何更好地保护动物的文章,请你提出至少两条合理化的建议。

提示：1. environment （环境） 2. rare （稀有的） 3. hunter ( 猎人)

注意：1.内容必须包括表格中提供的信息，可适当增加细节

2.词数：80—100词左右。开头已给出，不计入中词数。

How to protect animals better

As we all know, animals are our friends. But now many animals are in danger, so it’s our duty to protect them better.

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to protect animals better

As we all know, animals are our friends. But now many animals are in danger, so it’s our duty to protect them better.

As time goes by，the situation is becoming more and more difficult. The number of the animals is becoming smaller and smaller because people cut down so many trees that the environment is becoming worse and worse. Many animals have less and less land to live on. Also, some hunters often kill animals for more money. As a result, some animals become rare.

What can we do to protect them? Animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. I think we should call on more people to protect them better. First, it’s a good idea to set up more zoos and nature parks for endangered animals to live in. Second, we should stop people killing them. Also, we can plant more trees to make it easier for them to have a better life.

In a word, no animals, no hum beings. So we must take an action to protect them better.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是发挥想象用正确的英语把要点表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该文内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。