Question

根据中文和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文，所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。

生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……

现在，某英文报纸就分享（Sharing）话题征文，请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：share…with…;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version

I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.

【解析】

试题分析：这题材料作文，就是考生根据材料内容的提示提炼写作内容和要点，写作时要用简单句，包括主系表结构，主谓宾结构，时态主要是一般过去时态，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。注意应用所给短语和单词。

考点：材料作文

点评：材料作文要提炼写作内容和要点，要注意使用经典的英语句型结构来表达自己的思想，避免出现汉语式的英语表达。