Question

假设你是David, 请你根据以下提示，介绍自己的学校。

提示：1）在阳光中学上学，学校大，很漂亮；

      2）有十八个教室，一个图书馆，两个阅览室，四个电脑房，操场在教室的前面，我经常在那里打篮球；

      3）最喜欢英语，它很有趣；有许多课外活动，我参加了阅读俱乐部；

      4）老师们很友好，我们非常喜欢他们；

      5）我家离学校远，每天骑自行车上学，到校大约花费二十分钟。

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

      3）词数：100词左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。

Hello, everyone. I’m David. I’d like to talk about my school now.

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I love my school very much.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

     Hello, everyone. I’m David. I’d like to talk about my school now.

I study at Sunshine Middle School. It is a big and beautiful school. We have eighteen classrooms. We also have a library, two reading rooms and four computer rooms. Our playground is in front of the classrooms. I often play basketball there with my friends.

     English is my favorite subject. It’s interesting. And we have many after-school activities. I am in the reading club now. Our teachers are all very kind. We like them very much.

     I live far away from school. I go to school by bike every day. It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school. I love my school very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类短文写作，所给材料比较丰富，我们要做的就是把这些材料翻译成流利的英文。注意文章中的几个关键点，对学校设施的介绍，包括说清楚所在的位置，我最喜欢的科目，老师们都很友好，以及我如何上学等信息。通过分析可知，本篇短文主要用一般现在时，第一人称。注意行文连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这篇短文总体表达很流畅，要点全。文章中用到了一些比较好的短语和句型，如in front of 、fter-school activities、far away from 、t takes me about twenty minutes to get to school等。这些句型和短语的使用令整篇文章完整，有条理。并且文章中没有任何语法错误，表达很准确。

考点：提纲类作文。