Question

写作 (计15分)

“中国式过马路”现象成为各大媒体热点话题。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。

“中国式”过马路特点：十字路口，人们成群结队过马路，根本不看交通灯。

后果：每年，很多人因为不遵守交通法规而受伤或丧命。

闯红灯的理由：忙，没时间等；司机应该等行人。

解决办法：分发传单，让更多人知道交通安全的重要性；建更多的人行天桥；惩罚闯红灯者。

要求：

1. 必须包括所有相关信息（不必逐词翻译），可以做适当发挥。

词数90左右（开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）

参考词汇：遵守交通法规：follow the traffic rules       闯红灯：run the traffic lights

行人：pedestrian    传单：leaflet    人行天桥：footbridge

The Chinese style road crossing has become a hot topic in the media recently. At the crossroads in China, many people                                                                           

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The Chinese style road crossing has become a hot topic in the media recently. At the crossroads in China,many people

cross the roads in groups, they don’t look at the traffic lights at all . Because of this, every year, lots of people get hurt or even lose their lives. When asked why they run the traffic lights, many people say they are too busy to wait for the green lights. Besides, they think drivers should wait for the pedestrians. To solve the problem, we should give out leaflets to help more people understand the importance of traffic safety. More footbridges should be built to make it easier and safer to cross the street. People who run the traffic lights should be punished. By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料较为详细。写作中应先简单描述一下中国式过马路的特点，并分析原因，提出自己的建议。然后列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第二人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。注意情态动词should后面动词用原形。适当使用连词，序数词，注意从句的应用，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。