题目内容
【题目】写作。(15分)
假设你是Jack,你有一个最好朋友名叫Jim,请根据以下内容向大家介绍你们的情况。
Name | Height(身高) | Personality(性格) | Hair | Get up | Go to school | like |
tall | Funny | long | ||||
Jack | ★★ | ★★★ | ★★ | 6:40 | By bike | Play soccer |
Jim | ★★ | ★★ | ★★★ | 6:30 | On foot | Read books |
要求:1. 以My best friend and I 为题写一篇60词左右的文章;
2. 主谓结构完整,语句通顺,语法基本正确;
3. 层次清楚;卷面整洁,书写规范。(2分)
My best friend and I
【答案】
My best friend and I
I’m Jack and my best friend is Jim. I’m as tall as Jim. But Jim is funnier than I. My hair is longer than Jim’s. In the morning I get up at 6:40 while Jim gets up at 6:30. We all like school very much. I go to school by bike and Jim goes to school on foot. I like playing soccer and Jim likes reading books. We get along well with each other.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇短文要求介绍我自己(Jack)和Jim的情况。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作内容,主要包括身高、性格、头发、起床时间、上学方式以及喜好。主要内容虽然已经给出,但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,介绍了杰克和吉姆。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如We get along well with each other.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如I’m as tall as Jim. But Jim is funnier than I. I like playing soccer and Jim likes reading books.等。
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