Question

假设你和你们班的同学上周去郊游了，请根据下表的内容写一篇80词左右的短文来介绍一下你们的郊游。

活动项目	A field trip
活动时间	Sunday
活动地点	West Lake
交通方式	By bike
活动内容	See animals, go boating, have a picnic, photos, return
活动感受	Tired, glad

 

Answer 1

Last Sunday my classmates and I went on a field trip to West Lake. We met at our school gate early in the morning, and set off at 8 o’clock. All of us went there by bike. First we went to the zoo to see the animals. Then we went boating. At lunch time, we took our food and had a picnic. We took many beautiful photos.
When we returned home, we all felt very tired, but we were glad that we had a good day.

试题分析：本文所给材料较为简略，要求介绍自己的一次郊游活动。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般过去态，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，注意序数词和连接词的使用。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。