题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是Li Ming,学校英语俱乐部将要举行文明交友活动。请你根据下面表格提示,以 “ My best friend” 为题,写一篇英语短文把你最好的朋友介绍给大家。
Looks like | Tall; short and straight hair |
Favorite food | Tomato and egg noodles |
Opinions on TV shows | Like Animal World; can’t stand sitcoms |
Wants to be | A reporter |
Activity last weekend | Visit the Palace Museum with his parents |
要求:包含以上信息要点,条理清楚,语句通顺,60~80词。注意不要写出真实的人名和地名。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. Liu Wei is my best friend. He is 15 years old. He’s tall and has short and straight hair. His favorite food is tomato and egg noodles. He likes Animal World, but he can’t stand sitcoms. He wants to be a reporter. He thinks it’s interesting and exciting. Last weekend he visited the Palace Museum with his parents. They had a great time there. Liu Wei is friendly to everyone. Do you want to make friends with us?
【解析】
试题分析:本文要求介绍自己的好朋友李明,短文用第三人称,一般现在时态对朋友作介绍。根据表格提示,短文要从朋友的外貌、食物、影视爱好、理想及上周末参与的活动五个方面作介绍。上周末的活动要用一般过去时态,要注意时态的准确运用,句型的选择及英文句子的正确结构。
写作亮点:本范文包含了表格提示中的所有要点,条理清楚,语句通顺。首先作的外貌描述,be动词、have/has运用准确;然后描述朋友的爱好,favorite,like, can’t stand等等结构分别表达了爱好的不同程度,生动具体;介绍朋友的理想时,用到了不定式作宾语、带有宾语从句的主从复合句等等,以及短文最后用到的be friendly to, make friends with等短语,为短文增色不少。