题目内容
【题目】段落编写
使用所给的词语,编写一个意义相对完整的语段。
提示词:dream, musician, practice, early, with
要求:1. 使用全部提示词,并在语段中用下划波浪线“﹏﹏﹏”标出提示词;
2. 语段具有一个相对合理的主题意义;
3. 词数为100词左右。
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【答案】
One possible version:
I have a dream. I want to be a good musician. Because I like playing the piano and I am good at singing. Every morning I get up early, and I have a breakfast. Then I do some exercise and practice singing songs.Now I join the music club. I go to the club four times a week to learn to play the piano and sing. At night, I often watch the music program on TV with my father. My favorite singer is Na Ying. I hope to be a singer like her. Can my dream come true?
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我和我的朋友。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My /Her name is…,be good at及do well in等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己的交友意愿。。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字,接下来介绍我们的共同点与不同之处,最后指出我们的擅长。此处用了In some ways,a little more outgoing than,is good at,am good at等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。