Question

上周日天气晴朗，我和我的朋友一起去了动物园。根据提示用一般过去时态描述这次游玩。
提示词：（乘公交车，早上9:00出发，10:00到达，拍照，玩的高兴，下午4:00返回）

Answer 1

Last Sunday it was sunny.I went to the zoo with my friends.We went there by bus.We started at nine in the morning.We arrived at the zoo at about 10.We saw a lovely elephant, some beautiful giraffes and the  smart monkeys.We all liked monkeys because they were really interesting! We took some photos in the zoo.We came back at 4 in the afternoon. We had a good day.

试题分析：本文只给出了作文的一些话题，需要学生先根据提示列出提纲，要注意上下文的衔接，根据要求这是叙述的是上周日的事情，所以应该用一般过去式。
【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，使文章增色了不少，如：I went to the zoo with my friends. We all liked monkeys because they were really interesting!文中用了连词如：because和and等，使句子的结构复杂化了。