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Sep,9,2011 Sunday
Today my classmates and I went to the Old People's Home
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Step 9,2011Sunday
Today my classmates and I went to the Old People's Home on foot at 3 o'clock in the afternoon. As soon as we got there, we began to clean the rooms and wash clothes for the old people. Some of us talked with them. After that we gave them some performances. The old people enjoyed themselves very much. We stayed there for two hours. At about 5 o'clock we walked home.
I felt very happy (for what I had done) although I was tired. I think everyone should look after and respect old people.