Question

以“My Hobby”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。内容提示：1.你的爱好是什么？2. 你为什么喜欢它？3.你平时是怎么做的？

                                                                

                                                                   

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

My hobby

Different people have different hobbies .For example ,someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on. My hobby is to listen to music. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to music .Now I often listen to music. When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.

 Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。本文只给出写作要点，动笔前先要围绕主题确定写作内容，注意从三个方面进行叙述。根据内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：命题作文的写作

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。