题目内容
假如明天是你妈妈的生日,你想为妈妈做一份炒饭,请根据所给内容提示,写一篇你做炒饭的过程。1. 2. 3.
参考词汇:1. fried rice cooked meat oil salt green onions(葱)
2. cook cut put fry add
3. carefully finely(细微地) slowly lightly
要 求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
2.书写工整、规范;
3.根据所给内容及参考词汇,可适当发挥;
4.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;
3. 词数:70词左右。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday.
参考词汇:1. fried rice cooked meat oil salt green onions(葱)
2. cook cut put fry add
3. carefully finely(细微地) slowly lightly
要 求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
2.书写工整、规范;
3.根据所给内容及参考词汇,可适当发挥;
4.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;
3. 词数:70词左右。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday.
One possible version 1:
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday. I want to make fried rice for her in order to express my love. I am sure I can cook it very well. Now let me show you how to cook it. First, cut some cooked meat very finely. Next, I need to put some oil in the pan. Then fry the meat lightly. After that, I need to add the rice slowly. Fry it for a few minutes. Finally, add some salt and green onions. Now the fried rice is ready.(82words)
One possible version 2:
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday, I want to do something for my mother, I ’d like to make fried rice for her. First, I must cut some cooked meat very finely. Next, I need to put some oil in the pan, fry the meat lightly. After that, I need to add the rice slowly. Then fry it for a few minutes. Finally, I should add some salt and green onion. How delicious! My fried rice is ready, I hope my mother will enjoy it.
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,写做炒饭的过程。结合所给材料,可知本文主要用一般现在时,人称为单数第一,人称,句子结构主要为祈使句和带有情态动词的句子。注意做法步骤的先后顺序。比如:first,second,third等句式的应用。
【亮点说明】本文内容涵盖所有要点,格式正确,语言流畅,表达准确,意思连贯;先简要说明写作目的。同时运用first,second,then, finally表顺序的词使文章先后顺序清楚、意思连贯。恰当地运用了参考词汇表达不同步骤的不同做法。第一篇以祈使句为主;第二篇祈使句加带有must、need to等情态动词的句子是主要特点。
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