题目内容
【题目】书面表达。（共15分）
很多人认为当今的中学生有自己鲜明的特点。他们多才多艺，擅长琴棋书画；同时也常常以自我为中心，很少为他人着想。作为中学生，你认为自己最大的优点是什么？（请举例说明），缺点是什么？（请举例说明）。你应该如何扬长避短，做最好的自己？
要求：1．词数80左右。 文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2．短文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校。
3．注意不要遗漏要点。
It’s said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points．
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【答案】
It is said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points. They are good at many things, for example, music, drawing, sports. But they are also thought to be selfish. They often think about themselves.
I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others. I remember once I played basketball with my friends. Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.
Of course I have many disadvantages. I don’t work hard at my studies and always play computer games. So I am not good at my subjects. My teacher said to me I was clever, but I didn’t put my heart into it. I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them. I think I can overcome my shortcomings. I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.
【解析】
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要描述当代中学生的特点和举例说明作为中学生自己的优点和缺点，因此一般现在时（当代中学生的特点）和一般过去时（举例说明）运用较多。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。当然，写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理，表述的条理性和准确性。
温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：该范文结构清晰，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯。尤为突出之处在短语和句子的巧妙运用，如It is said that；be good at；be willing to；Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.；I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.等这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
