Question

14．节日让我们快乐，节日也给我们以独特的感受．假如你是王文，代表学校参加某英文网站以"My Favorite Festival"为题开展的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示和要求，从中西方节日中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文投稿．
提示：1．说出一个你喜欢的节日，并说明理由．
2．描述自身的一次经历或你通常是怎样度过这个节日的；
3．谈谈你对这个节日的感受或建议．
要求：1．不少于80词；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3．短文要包含所有的提示要点，可适当发挥．

Answer 1

分析 文章从三个方面叙述了中国的传统节日---春节．春节是一年的开始，它是一个非常重要的节日．节前打扫房子，装饰房子，买新衣和置办年货．过节时，穿新衣，吃大餐，放鞭炮，玩耍．节后，走亲访友，其乐融融．分层次按提示一一叙述，可以适当发挥．

解答 参考范文：
    Would you like to know something about our Chinese traditional festivals？There are many traditional festivals in China．They are called Spring Festival，Mid-Autumn Day and other festivals．Let me tell you something about Spring Festival．
    In fact，Spring Festival is the beginning of a new year．It is the most important traditional holiday in China．A few days before the festival，I often clean my house．I can decorate houses with beautiful flowers and pictures．After that，we wear their new clothes．
    On the eve of the festival，family members usually get together and have big meals at home．At midnight，they set off fireworks to welcome the new day．During the festival，kids can get some money from old people．They only play and play，parents aren't angry to them．It usually lasts for 15 days．During it，people visit their relatives and friends，they often talk about what they did last year．
     Welcome to China to spend this holiday together!What happy days we have!
　                                   Wang Wen

点评 文章在表达时，使用了形容词的最高级形式：the+adj．最高级，突出了春节的重要性．还用了something nice to eat，形容词和不定式放在形容词后，作后置定语，使得文章更出彩．