Question

阅读信息表，如果你是Li Fang的朋友， 写一段关于你的朋友Li Fang 的短文，60词左右，首句已给出。

Name：Li Fang           Age:13             Birthplace(出生地) ：Jiaxing

School: No.1 Middle School           Class:  One        Grade:  Seven

Teacher: Miss Yang                         Best friend: Daming

Favourite season:  Autumn                  Favourite sport: Football

Father: Manager\hotel                      Mother: Nurse \ hospital

                                                                                                                                            

This is my friend, her name is Li Fang.____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

She is 13. She is from Jiaxing. She studies at No.1 Middle School. And I am in Class One, Grade Seven. Her teacher is Miss Yang. Her best friend is Daming. Autumn is her favorite season. Her favorite sport is football. Her father is a manager of a hotel. Her mother is a nurse in a hospital.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍个人情况及家庭成员。本题给出的材料较为详细。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题，然后组织成文。注意叙述的条理性，适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式，在叙述中使用连接词，使叙述逻辑更为合理，层次更加分明，为文章增色不少.如: is from +地点。来自哪里，favorite sport 最喜欢的运动等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：考查提纲作文。