Question

16．假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东，为了配合环保教育主题活动，请根据下面所给提示，用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1．环保措施和美化城市的措施（各2条）；
2．你的希望．
注意：
1．注意文章的整体连贯；
2．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.80词左右．
Dear friends，
In order to make the environment more beautiful，we shoulddo what we can
to protect it．First，we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful．Also，always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere．As we all know，water is becoming less and less．So it's quite necessary to save water．For example，turn the tap off after washing．Last，but not the least，we'd better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car．
In my opinion，if everyone tries his best to protect the envir onment，our city will become nicer and cleaner!
Thank you!
Wang Dong．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇倡议书，话题是"环保教育"，作为学生会主席提出倡议并要求大家做到，所以要用第一人称，时态用一般现在时态．倡议的内容要包括环保措施和美化城市的措施，并且叙述在此倡议下自己对环保的希望是什么．提出的两项措施内容不能少于两条，提出倡议常用到句型：We should…/We shouldn't…

解答 Dear friends，
In order to make the environment more beautiful，we should do what we can
to protect it．First，we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful．Also，always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere．As we all know，water is becoming less and less．So it's quite necessary to save water．For example，turn the tap off after washing．Last，but not the least，we'd better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car．
     In my opinion，if everyone tries his best to protect the envir onment，our city will become nicer and cleaner!
      Thank you．
                                                       Wang Dong

点评 完成书面表达要语言流畅，语句通顺，合乎逻辑，使用简单的连接成分，使内容更有层次性．