Question

【题目】书面表达：

假如你叫李平，上周你的父母带你去北京旅行了。请根据表格内的信息提示，给你在美国的笔友John写一封信，讲述一下你的旅行经历。

Weather	hot
Beijing	beautiful and clean
How did you go there?	by train
What did you do ?	visit the Great Wall play in the Beijing Amusement Park take a walk in Xidan Shopping Street

要求：语句通顺，篇章结构完整；60词左右。（开头和结尾部分不计入总词数）

Dear John:

I’m happy to write to you. Last week

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We had great fun there. I hope you can have a chance to visit Beijing.

Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m happy to write to you. Last week I went to Beijing with my parents. It’s the capital of China. And it’s a beautiful and clean city. We went there by train. The weather was hot. We visited the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. They were beautiful. Then we played in Beijing Amusement Park. It was really exciting. On the last day, we took a walk in Xidan Shopping Street.

We had great fun there. I hope you can have a chance to visit Beijing.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以李平的名义给笔友John写一封信，讲述一下去北京旅行的经历。根据提示，短文要讲述天气、对北京的总的感受、如何去的及在北京参加的活动等等。要求语句通顺，篇章结构完整。短文用第一人称，用一般过去时态。要注意时态的正确构成及时态的一致性。

写作亮点：短文开头总体说明了上周去了北京，说明了对北京的感受：美丽、整洁；然后具体地描述了在北京旅行的各项活动。叙述清楚，具体生动。包含了提示的所有要点，层次分明，重点突出。