题目内容
书面表达(共20分)
上周,你班以“告别陋习,走向文明”为主题进行了一次班会活动。通过活动,同学们收获很大,尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据表格内容以“Li Hua’s Changes”写一篇关于李华!的短文;倡导大家都向李华同学学习。
要求: 1.语句通顺,语法正确,字数80词左右。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名
过去表现 | 现在表现 |
经常上学迟到 | 准时到校 |
乱扔垃圾 | 帮助清洁校园 |
经常玩电脑游戏 | 积极参加学校的各种活动 |
经常不完成作业 | 上课认真,作业认真 |
不爱和同学说话 | 与别人相处融洽 |
Li Hua’s Changes
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Li Hua makes the greatest progress during this activity. He used to be late, but now he is on time. He used to drop litter anywhere, but now he helps to clean up the school. At present, Li Hua joins the school all kinds of activities and listen to the teacher carefully in class. Of course, he also do well in his homework. However, he used to play computer games and didn’t finish his homework. He used to be quiet and didn’t like to talk with others. But now he gets on well with others.
Li Hua’s changes make us impress. Everyone should learn from him and put heart into everything he does.
解析试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。以表格的形式给出了作文的主要内容,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态,及句式等重要内容。由于材料涉及过去和现在的内容,故注意过去时态和一般现在时态的应用。
考点:本题考查学生语言组织和表达能力
点评:该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力,在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息,不遗漏要点,可以适当发挥。做到表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯