Question

【题目】

假如你是Wendy，你准备邀请Millie去扬州动物园游玩，请根据以下提示给Millie写一封邀请信。

A trip to Yangzhou Zoo
位置	城东， 离市中心不远
环境	空气新鲜。春天鸟语花香。里面动物种类多，有……(列举一些动物)
活动项目	划船，看动物表演，玩游戏
交通方式	公交车，半小时
集合地点、时间	校门口、周日上午8点
对这次游玩的憧憬	……

要求：1.文章条理清楚，语句连贯，必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译。

2. 词数100左右

3. 不得出现真实的校名和人名。

Dear Millie，

We are going to have a trip to Yangzhou Zoo this Sunday.

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Would you like to come with us?

Yours，

Wendy

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Millie，

We are going to have a picnic at Yangzhou Zoo this Sunday. Yangzhou Zoo is in the east of Yangzhou. It is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about half an hour by bus. The air is fresh there. In spring， the park is full of flowers and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. In the zoo， you can see funny monkeys， gentle pandas， tall giraffes and many other animals. We also can row a boat， watch animal shows or play games there. We will meet at the school gate at 8：00 am this Sunday. I am sure we’ll have a good time in the zoo.

Would you like to come with us?

Yours，

Wendy

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and、also，以及固定句型如It is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about half an hour by bus.等等，这些都为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。