Question

11．假如你是李平，准备参加学校组织的英语征文比赛．请根据下面所提供的信息，介绍今天在你校操场举行的"ONE for ONE"图书义卖活动的情况并谈谈你的感受．
注意：1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称．
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．
3．词数80左右．文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
This afternoon a charity sale was held on the piayground in our school．Its purpose was to donate books to children in poor areas．If you bought one book，you gave a new one to a child in need at the
same time．All the teachers and students took an active part in this event．Everyone looked quite happy．
As we know，books are bridges to knowledge．If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more knowledge，he will have more chances of success．In this way，his life can be greatly improved．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇图画作文，要求是假如你是李平，准备参加学校组织的英语征文比赛．请根据下面所提供的信息，介绍今天在你校操场举行的"ONE for ONE"图书义卖活动的情况并谈谈你的感受，写作内容应该包括：1．简要介绍活动的情况．2．谈谈自己的看法．介绍活动时可以用第三人称，时态用一般过去时；谈自己的感受时用第一人称，用一般将来时，也可以用到情态动词can/should 等．文中可以多处用到if引导的条件状语从句，让文章更出彩．

解答 This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our school．Its purpose was to donate books to children in
poor areas．If you bought one book，you gave a new one to a child in need at the same time．All the teachers and students
took an active part in this event．Everyone looked quite happy．
   As we know，books are bridges to knowledge．If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more
knowledge，he will have more chances of success．In this way，his life can be greatly improved．

点评 本题是一篇图画作文，这种题型的解题要点在于：（1）结合线索，弄清图画内容，把握情节线索（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图．本题还给出了起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了．