Question

书面表达（15分）
假设你是Tony根据提示语写一篇自我介绍，包括姓名、年龄、班级、国籍、家庭成员及职业和喜欢的颜色和食物，词数80词左右。（要求用上所有提示语）
提示语：Tony,  13 years old,  Class 4,  Grade 1,  England,  father, teacher,  school,  mother,
doctor,  brother,  driver,  favorite,  blue,  vegetable
                               
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        

Answer 1

I’m Tony     
My name is Tony. I’m 13 years old. I come from England. Now I study in a school. I’m in Class 4, Grade 1. I have a happy family. My father is a teacher. He teaches in a school. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. And my brother is a driver. I love them very much. my favorite color is blue and I like vegetables best. Do you want to make friends with me?      

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己的短文。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。