题目内容
文段表达。(共15分)
根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
每个人在自己的生活中都会遇到一个对自己影响至深的人,如:家人、老师、同学、朋友……
现在,某英文报纸正在开展题为“The important person in my life” 的征文活动。请你投稿,稿件内容包括:你生活中最重要的那个人是谁?描述一件发生在你们之间的事儿, 并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语:important person, remember, help, wonderful, think
I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. For me, that's my classmate, Tom.
I still remember that once my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.
From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于开放性文体,能够很大程度上调动学生的想象空间,学生可以结合自己的经历,首先对每个人在他们心中都有一个重要的人物,这个现象进行肯定,接下来结合自己的一次经历,说明他是如何帮助我的,如何给了最深的印象。最后对自己所经历的事情的感受进行描写。
考点:提纲类作文
点评:初中英语的作文,出考察学生连词成句的能力外,还要求学生能够变换句式,学会用不同的表达,来表达同一个意思,要在“准”字和“美”上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面,同时要学会多用副词来修饰谓语动词,这样显示出深厚的语言根底。对于初三的作文,在平时的练习中,注意多背诵范文,对于写的好的句子进行默写,考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。