题目内容
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m member of _____.”
(以”我是``````的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符合不占格子”)
提示:你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的人员,或者作为家庭,班级,社区额的一员,写出你的经历,感受等.
Use the following points as a reference.
Are you glad to be a member of ``````?
What do you do in it?
How do you feel as such a member?
【写作思路】
一、审题
本文要求写一篇介绍自己作为某兴趣小组或某社团成员的文章,要求学生写出自己的经历以及感受等。
二、列举写作要点
1. have been a member of singing and dancing club for +时间;
2. I’m an actor in the this club.
3. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.
三、列出关键短语和句型
be a member of , an actor, singing and dacing, feel very happy,
范文
A Possible Version:
I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club
Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.
【解析】作文标题为“I'm a member of…”,这样的考题让每个考生都有话可说。题目包含5张图片提示,分别代表家庭、歌舞俱乐部、爱护动物者社团、自然科学竞赛社团
题目中蕴含“责任意识和公民意识”的两纲内容,与“往年的考题以强调自我感受居多”不同,今年考题引导学生思考我可以为他人、为集体付出些什么。
在写作过程中一定要注意提示“一定要表达具体是什么的成员”,根据几个guided questions,最好能在开头表达是否开心加入此团体,后面紧接着描述原因即在作为一员主要工作是什么,最后再来一个作为成员的感受作为总结,这样整个作文的结构就清楚了。但想获得很高分,还要尽量避免语法拼写等错误,写出一些比较出彩的复合句,这就需要同学平时勤练基本功了。
It’s not easy to be an astronaut’s son.Everybody expects you to be special or perfect. I often wonder how my father ever had a son like me. I mean he’s so special and so good at everything he does. Even in middle school he was monitor and captain of the football team.
Well, to be honest, I often dream about being some kind of hero or doing something special—like saving a child from a burning building One morning my teacher said there would be a Father’s Day writing competition for the whole school.“I hope we have a winner right here in my class.”
When I got home,I started to think about what to write.My father is an astronaut. No, I wouldn’t start like that. That was the way others saw him.How did I see my father?
Hmm…I saw him sitting with me in the dark when I had a terrible dream.I remembered how he hugged me for hours when my dog Spotty was killed by a car. Yes, these were the things I was going to write. To me,he wasn’t just a famous astronaut. He was my dad.
My parents and l went to school Thursday night. There were so many people in the big hall! My dad looked at me, and I shrugged(耸肩).
The third prize was announced and it was not me.1 was relieved(释然)and disappointed(失望) at the same time. The second prize was announced. it was me. I went up to the stage and read what I had written,“My father’s son”.When I finished,Dad put his hand on my shoulder.“Son,this is the proudest moment of my life.’’
It was the proudest moment of my life, too. Maybe I’ll never be a great hero or win a Nobel Prize, but it was enough just to be my father’s son.
【小题1】The writer felt it to be the son of a famous person.
A.1ucky | B.natural | C.hard | D.pleasant |
A.become astronaut |
B.become a great hero |
C.be made school team captain |
D.be made monitor |
A.A lot of special things he had done |
B.The story of his father as an astronaut. |
C.The unforgettable time he spent with his father. |
D.The experiences his father had in middle school. |
A.My daydream | B.My father’s son |
C.My famous father | D.My happy family |