Question

【题目】书面表达

这周将有一些美国交流学生来我校, 你想邀请其中一对双胞胎Lucy和Lily五一节来你家作客，你打算带领他们参观你居住的小区，并组织一些活动。根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信。

位置	位于市中心
环境	空气清新，鸟语花香
邻居	友好善良，一些志愿者经常在社区中心集中，分享自己的一技之长 帮助人们解决各种问题(举两例) 大家就像一家人
活动	上午去泰兴公园划船 下午去博物馆看精美的艺术品并用粉笔画3-D画 晚上去当地剧场观看一部关于动物世界的电影。

要求：不要逐句翻译，包含所有要点，注意格式，字数100左右。

Dear Lucy and Lily,

I would like to invite you to my home.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lucy and Lily,

I would like to invite you to my home. My new home is in the centre of the city. The air is fresh. The birds are singing and the flowers are sweet. My neighbors are friendly and kind. Some of them often meet at the community centre and share their different skills. They often help people with all kinds of problems. Some of them often visit the old people and do some shopping for them. This weekend, they’ll help the old people clean their flats. People here are like a big family.

In the morning we are going boating in Taixing Park. In the afternoon we are going to the museum to see fine works of art and draw 3-D pictures with chalk. And at night we’ll go to the local theater to watch a film about the animal world. I am looking forward to seeing you.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇邀请函，写作时要运用书信的格式，写前要认真阅读表格所提供的信息，从四个方面去组织写作素材，信中叙述的家的住址，环境及邻居的情况要用一般现在时，在介绍活动时要运用一般将来时态。

写作亮点：本文包含了所有内容要点，特别是一些连词的运用，使语句更加通顺，连贯。比较经典的语言有：I would like to invite you to my home. People here are like a big family. I am looking forward to seeing you.时态运用非常准确，且做到了主谓一致，无语法错误。